可以经常改变主语(数字或者是对象)来使得句式更加丰富

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第一段 改写题目+整体概述 最为明显的变化/整体性的变化

it can be obviously seen that the numbers of …… all experienced an overall upward trend and significant changes took place regarding the figures of ……

可以明显看出…的数量整体有上升趋势,….的数字发生了重大变化

throughout … years 在….年间

Despite some fluctuations 尽管有一些波动

第二段 详细描述变化最大的/突出的/主要的

To be specific….

the dominant ones最主要的

第三段 描述变化不大的/持平的/稳定的

slightly

第四段 结尾段

To summarize,

描述数字

approximately

The proportion of 

Ranging from 

Particularly noticeable 值得注意

上升

Tripled

upward trend

Grow substantially to the peak

Followed by a gradual climb

A moderate increase

A dramatic increase

Rise back

Recover to its original level

climbed drastically 急剧

exceeding

下降:

fell back to 

drop sharply

Witness a slight decline

Acid level in mouth from consumption of sugar/honey

第一段:改写题目

The graph compares acid level in mouth overtime after people eat sugary foods and the possibility of tooth decay occurrence. 

概述段:cane sugar最易导致蛀牙,蜂蜜则最不易

Overall, among the 3 sugary ingredients, cane sugar has the highest risk of tooth decay, while honey is least likely to cause the problem. For PH level, the level 5.5 marks the point where tooth decay occurs. 

细节段-1: 糖分摄入5分钟后,PH值达到最低

Looking at the information in detail, the initial PH level is 7 at the moment sweet foods are eaten. The first 5 minutes saw a dramatic increase in acidity caused by the 3 ingredients, with PH level standing at around 3.5 for cane sugar, 4.25 for fruit sugar and 4.75 for honey respectively.

细节段-2:每周成分之后的变化

After the intake of honey and fruit sugar, the figures for PH value rise back the safe level at 5.5 after 15 and 20 minutes each, while the same process takes over 30 minutes for cane sugar. In addition, after 25 minutes, the PH statistic for honey recovers to its original level at 7, while it takes 35 minutes for this indicator to return to the initial level after the consumption of fruit sugar. Finally, the PH value for cane sugar consumers recovers after 40 minutes.  

overseas visitors to threee different areas in European

第一段:改写题目➕概述

The line graph indicates how many international tourists visited three separate regions in a European nation during a 20-year period from 1987 to 2007. In total, it can be obviously seen that the numbers of visitors to these three regions all experienced an overall upward trend and significant changes took place regarding the figures of tourists to the lakes. 

第二段 主体段1 前往湖区的海外游客数量大涨,到达最高峰以后急剧下降

To be specific, there were around 10,000 foreign tourists who were attracted to the lakes in 1987. After that, the number grew substantially to the peak at 75,000 in 2000 before dropping sharply to approximately 50,000 in 2007.

第三段 主体段2 选择海外游客数量一直稳居首位,总量经历小幅下跌后持续稳定上涨

In addition, the number of foreigners who chose to spend holiday at the coast was roughly 40, 000 in 1987, making the coast the most popular destination out of the three. The next 5 years witnessed a slight decline in the number of visitors to around 36,000, which was followed by a gradual climb to 75,000 in 2007.

witnessed a slight decline 经历小幅下降

follow by a gradual climb 持续稳定增长

第四段 主体段3 选择山区度假的海外游客相对来说较少,总量虽然经历两次小幅下降,总体仍呈上升趋势

On the other hand, the mountains remained the least intriguing travel option among these three places. A moderate increase was seen in the number of tourists going to the mountainous areas from 20,000 in 1987 to 35,000 in 2007, except modest reductions from 1989 to 1995 and from 1997 to 2000 respectively.

总结

1.      There be 结构:“…there were around 10,000 foreign tourists who were attracted to the lakes in 1987…”

2.      描述对象的数量为主语:“…the number of foreigners who chose to spend holiday at the coast was roughly 40, 000 in 1987…”

3.      时间段为主语:“…The next 5 years witnessed a slight decline in the number of visitors to around 36,000…”

4.      趋势为主语:“…A moderate increase was seen in the number of tourists going to the mountainous areas from 20,000 in 1987 to 35,000 in 2007…”

people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in the UK 

The chart shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in the UK between 1984 and 2003.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» You should write at least 150 words.

开始段:第一段:改写题目 + 概述

The line chart illustrates the proportion of people of 4 age groups, who went to the cinema more than once every month in the UK. Generally, the total number of all age groups almost tripled throughout 20 years.

主题段1:第二段:人数比例最多和最少的年龄段

The young people, aged 15-24, were the dominant ones; on the other hand, the oldest group, aged above 35, was the least, with both of them undergoing overall increases. More specifically, starting from 20% in 1984, the rise of the former was particularly remarkable in the initial seven years, during which time it almost doubled, and then despite some fluctuations, it eventually fell back to 40% in 2003. The latter, however, experienced a slight increase, from 0%-5%, and then there was a sharp climb, reaching just above 20% finally.

主题段2:第三段:中间人数比例的年龄段

The rate of those who are aged 24-35 and that of children aged 7-14 were quite similar, with the middle age group slightly more than the youngest. From 15% and 10% respectively in 1984, both of them climbed drastically, with 30% and 28% in 2003. It is particularly noticeable that they were equal in 1990.

结尾段

To summarize, overall increases can be noticed in all four age groups, and in 2003 the proportion of those aged 15-24 was the only one exceeding 40%, with the remaining three being similar, ranging from 10%-20%.

地图题

方位词

northwest
southeast
描述方向长的单词在前(south,north),短的单词在后(east,west)

meet the road 和某条路交叉

stretching from the west to the east 从东向西延伸

off the hotel 在酒店附近

地点

a parking lot 停车场

supporting facilities配套设施

infrastructures 基础设施

其他词&句型

block 街区

The map given illustrates描绘了

development = reconstruction

be noticed 被发现

remain the same

are subsitituted by

altered considerably 变化很大

demolished 拆除了

题目

村庄的变迁

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Write a report based on the map.

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开始段:第一段:改写题目

The map given illustrates the reconstruction of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

主体段1:切割法---主路1

In 1995, there was a main road, extending from the northwest to the southeast, with several houses nearby. A small residental area can also be noticed in the middle block,linking to this road. To the east of this road were located the farmland and forest park. Currently, the residental block almost remain the same, while the original agriculture and natural scenery are substituted by the entertaining area dominated by golf and tennis.

主体段2: 切割法---主路2

Another street, stretching from the west to the east, was sited adjacent to the coast, which meets the main road with a hotel around the corner and a cafe opposite to it. Several shops and fish markets could be seen to the both sides of the street, while the fishing port can also be accessed in the past. However, the southern area has altered considerably since 1995. The original harbor is demolished, with the previous supporting facilities all replaced by restaurants and apartments respectively. It is noticeable that a parking lot is newly constructed just off the hotel.

结尾:整体概述 一句话总结

In summary,the function of infrastructures in the village has changed from serving agriculture and fishery to entertainment and related supporting facilities.